The beach keeps me alive
the the world makes me thrive,
I am curious to learn to turn,
in a good direction,
sometimes Adventurous is dangerous but its fun
I used rhythm by making a good beat to my poem. I used rhythm because it makes the writing improved and to make a poem you should have at least a little rhythm in them. I used rhythm by rhyming alive with thrive and learn with turn. I used rhythm by having the rhymes close to each other but not to close. Rhythm is important because it make a sentence a poem and it makes your sentence come alive.
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